Paris.W @ Tamaki Primary School: Structure and Language

Thursday 16 October 2014

WALT recap and self-evaluate on our writing.

Today I self-evaluated my explanation.

Please leave a comment on what you think.

About Me

Kia Ora , Talofa Lava , Malo E Lelei , and greetings to you all

My name is Paris and I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School.

I will be working in Room 10 for the rest of the year with my teacher Miss Aireen and Kelly. I am 12 years old.

In school my favourite subject is Writing because I like to learn how to write good narratives and stories.

My favourite sport is Netball because I would like to compete with other people defending , attacking or shooting. My favourite food is Wendy’s.

In 2016 I am looking forward to choosing the right pathway and making myself a positive person.

One person I admire is my Aunty because she plays for the Central Pulse and she gives me advice for Netball.

"If you are scared to play against people and things look hard, do not give up" so I really admire my Aunty.

No reira Tena Katou , Tena Katou , Tena Tatou Katoa

Paris.W @ Tamaki Primary School